Wow, I like the thick wall of rock sound. Got a little Weezer vibe in there methinks. I'm enjoying the melodies, and the chorus harmonies. We need to work on your distorted electric guitar tone though. 😛 Back to the positives, good la la's, they could have started way earlier in the song even.

I like instrumentation and effects to emphasize absurd. Good chorus and harmonies as usual. Nice stop. Getting slightly jaded of your stock drums... but not enough to complain too much. Very familiar song without being able to put my finger on it - Semisonic, maybe, mixed with Soundgarden?

Forgive me for not knowing the terminology I should probably use, but the music made the hair on my arms stand up...in a bad way. I’m not a fan of distorted instruments or whatever effects you were using. Lyrically I thought you did fine, and it’s fun to see how some of you all are using the same examples here and there at times. But I can’t really say I’m ever going to want to listen to this again.