noma
Forum postComposition: 3/10
Lyrics: 4/10
Performance: 4/10
Production: 6/10
Creativity bonus: 2
Challenge bonus: 0
Not an origin story, once again (except for the spoken bridge). So no challenge bonus. This song doesn't have anything memorable in it, to me, apart from the "James Brown style breakdown", which is... um... strange. It gives you a creativity bonus though.
Cavedwellers
Composition: 6/10
Lyrics: 8/10
Performance: 7/10
Production: 9/10
Creativity bonus: 3
Challenge bonus: 4
Nice lyrics again, somehow transcending the concept of "origin story". It's an interesting way to meet the challenge, so I'll give you a nice challenge bonus! The recording, production, and performance sounds solid, but I wish it were a bit catchier. It doesn't stay in my head for long. This is why I gave you fewer composition points. The song still sticks out from most of the others - and I know what you are capable of. Looking forward to your round one entry 🙂