The intro's guitar feedback, glockenspiels and panned drum machine made me go "ok, this is going to be the coolest song ever"; unfortunately, the song immediately drops all those elements after the first 10 seconds. Meh. I want to hear THAT song. I like how you seem to have built the song around that lead backwards loop. What the heck is wrong with this mix? Your vocals are WAY out in front, and while they sound full, the music in the background sounds thin and brittle. The synthesizer that comes in on the right feels like a dentist's drill right in my brain. The verses get a little repetitive, but the chorus and bridge are a real treat. The deliberate enunciation and slant rhymes make the vocal feel a bit unnatural. Short but sweet.