theSundayColors
Forum postI love the melody. The chorus is catchy and the instrumentation is totally my “vibe”. I think the lyrics are a bit lackluster. Especially given your target, you could hit a lot harder than you do.
Rachael Layne
Pump the Brakes
We're both confused about how you got here
You are not qualified, you don't belong
You are despicable, gross, and greedy
Masses will cheer when you are dead and gone
I never wanted to feel this way
Now I'm just counting the days
There is an accident that's in the making
Caused by your lies and caused by your mistakes
You're just an idiot, and you're a loser
You better learn to pump the brakes
You had the money and the reputation
Born into privilege and you had it all
How could somebody screw it up so badly
And you are barreling toward a wall
I never wanted to feel this way
Now I'm just counting the days
There is an accident that's in the making
Caused by your lies and caused by your mistakes
You're just an idiot, and you're a loser
You better learn to pump the brakes
And old men like you will be done soon
You'll be remembered as a buffoon
You're a buffoon
There is an accident that's in the making
Caused by your lies and caused by your mistakes
You're just an idiot, and you're a loser
You better learn to pump the brakes
There is an accident that's in the making
Caused by your lies and caused by your mistakes
You're just an idiot, and you're a loser
You better learn to pump the brakes
You better learn to pump the brakes
You better learn to pump the brakes
I love the melody. The chorus is catchy and the instrumentation is totally my “vibe”. I think the lyrics are a bit lackluster. Especially given your target, you could hit a lot harder than you do.
another song of extremely high quality! I think this might be my favourite of your songs so far, it's very catchy and the chorus has a real kick to it. Great vocal performance again, too.
I think it’s pretty clear how he got there, but I can’t help but agree with the rest. You come nonstop with the disses which is great. The part where you repeat “You’re a buffoon” actually seemed out of place. No major complaints with this song, but going political is always a bit of a risk. Fingers crossed there aren’t Trump fans on the panel.
Great vocal performance, and I really loved the melodies in the prechorus and chorus. instrumentation sounds great, I like the little guitar licks and runs between vocal lines, there's a particular ascending bit that sounds slightly dissonant and I really dig it. Lots of disses! However, I kind of wished they were more creative; things like "you're an idiot and a loser" are insulting but not terribly specific. The "buffoon" part is controversial but I liked it! But I will admit it doesn't seem like it fits into the rest of the song stylistically. (Maybe take it out for the radio edit?)