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Million WattsNur Ein XI
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Entry from Million Watts in Nur Ein XI.

Song must feature an obvious flaw. Flaw cannot be lyrical.

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Million Watts
By 0-DuToVa

V1: In a country that you don't know
Lived a man (or so we're told)
Built a wormhole in his mind
But doesn't know the day or time

V2: Made a spaceship out of brick
Some say he is a lunatic
Check all boards, all systems go
Leaves the launch pad, oh what a show

He's got a toy gun
That fits in his pocket
Goes off just like
A booster rocket
See the beams race
All across the sky
A million watt laser
In disguise

V3: Passes Mars, all the planets
Checks a gauge begins to panic
Travels cross the galaxy
Low on fuel, a tragedy

V4: Dead in space, no more power
Out of air, just one more hour
Looks around and finds his toy
There might be hope, he spins for joy

He's got a toy gun
That fits in his pocket
And goes off just like
A booster rocket
See the beams race
All across the sky
A million watt laser
In disguise

(Flaw in arrangement - Too few bars between each set of verses)

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noma

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Composition: 5/10
Lyrics: 7/10
Performance: 6/10
Production: 7/10

Creativity bonus: 2
Challenge bonus: 0

The "flaw in arrangement" doesn't really count for me, as it doesn't sound flawed to me. I can see what your intention was, though. It just doesn't feel that way to me. Nice song, but nothing special.

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