the performance / mix issues that I mentioned when reviewing your first song are much improved - the lead vocals sound so much better in this round. If this song was approximately half the length I think I'd have rated it pretty high up, but unfortunately it's easily the longest song in the round and doesn't really feel like it uses that time well - we get a hard-to-enjoy modified-omnichord solo that sounds like a recording glitch and many, many repeats of the chorus. I like the chorus, but this feels very much like a "kill your darlings" scenario, this very much needs an edit.

cool organ, the call and response rocks, love the weird synth/guitar breakdown

I like all the weird lo-fi sounds in this production, although the mix is pretty muffled, and the vocals are so much better than last week’s. The call and response vocals are great, it’s a catchy chorus, and I like your lyrical concept. You know from last year’s Nur Ein that I’m a fan of murder in songs, but that whole weird Doing a Murder bridge in the middle was pretty unlistenable, and I think overall this song dragged on a lot longer than it needed to.

I generally love these verses, but I have two issues with this chorus. One, it's the same lyric over and over again, which I think is a stylist choice, but for my tastes, it gets to be a little boring, which is rough in this big pack. I hear the changes in the melody, but the lack of word changes hurts. Second the male vocalist is a bit overpowering in the mix, so the first time he comes into the mix, I get slapped in the face/ears. The volume gets better for the rest of the song, but that first entry hurt. Also, I don't get the bridge? It's a lot of noises that I'm not sure if I'm supposed to feed into a binary-to-English translator or something else, but I don't understand how it's supposed to serve the rest of the song. I think most of my critique is just a clash or personal tastes, so I don't have any real advice or things to improve, so I definitely hope you'll continue entering songs so I can hear more and appreciate some new sounds in my ears.

i like the take. The vocals bother me a bit, though. The sound is pinched and overly nasal in a way that I think is not true to your actual sound. I can hear a timbre kinda like a soprano Cher, but you need to release the pressure and let it happen naturally. Try sitting/standing up straight and making sure you have a solid breath under you. I like the call and response, but I think it goes twice as long as it should at any given time. Good sounds Im the arrangement, too.