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Forum postvery clever start to the song, immediately grabbed my attention! I like the rhythm of the verses a lot, the different rhythms in the drums / bass / organ generally make for some interesting textures. The percussion contributes nicely to those textures, subtle but effective. Lyrics are solid. Vocal layering / harmonies don't work for me as well as your previous song, there's a lot going on especially in the final chorus and it feels a little jarring to me, the mixture of harmonies and vibrato is always tricky and it doesn't quite work for me here.