Really cute lyrics--I like the angle you took. The vocal processing was weird--it made it really hard to understand your words, particularly when you’re throwing things like “bunyip” and “Brahmapura” in there. There were some nice hooky parts of this, and then a bunch of parts that didn’t really make sense to me, or didn’t feel quite like they fit together. For instance, I’m not quite sure what you were going for as far as the melody on “than the girl for me,” it really sounded odd to me, but I can’t quite tell if that’s an execution issue or if you’re just nailing notes that don’t really seem to fit. I am super on board with the “A Day In the Life” crescendo thing, it was worth using the weird brass just to get that effect in there.