Much nicer drum tone than last time! Pretty good transitions. I like the lead guitar part. IMO, the lyrics aren't all that challenge-worthy.

Ok, I’m very quickly figuring out that this round is going to have to be about a feeling for me. I knew 1 sentence wasn’t going to lend itself to a great story, but so far the sentences that have been chosen are rather blah… They should be something that’s going to evoke some sort of emotion since you have so little to say this round.