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Weekend in the City
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Manhattan Glutton

Entry from Weekend in the City in Nur Ein VIII.

Epic story song

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you threw me a ball
a long time ago
underhand
and i still missed
if i had hit
a homerun
would we still have recently kissed?

you were a flirt
and i was too
luckily i got your name
and even though i had missed
i was hoping for a second pitch

back then i was spending my holidays in new york city
back then i was spending my time trying to get you out of my head

we went our ways
i stayed north
you went south to the windy city
far away from your pain
and i thought i'd never see you again

back then i was spending my holidays in new york city
back then i was spending my time pretending not to think about you

now i think i understand why our lives didn't go as planned
there was a reason, oh

now i think i understand

cause i'm spending every minute
every hour, every day
trying to rearrange my moments
just to get another gaze
upon you
oh i'm spending my weekends with you

i'm stressed out and exhausted
i'm stretched thin and distracted

i'm sleeping half of what i need
on a bed that's cold and busted

i'm half the man i'm supposed to be
because my other half is stranded

without you
oh i'm spending my weekend with you

now i think i understand, why life didn't go as planned

i went to spain, i went down under, i went to new york
i went to out west, i went down south, and east through newark
but i wondered
if i'd followed through
what would've happend with you?

then one day
out of the blue
i reached out and made some plans with you
of visits
of roadtrips
i was staying in chicago with you

back then i was spending my holidays being down
back then i was spending my extra time spinning my wheels round and round

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glennny

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Is this epic? It does have a long length. I suppose its epic in scope. It’s much more “when the Levy Breaks” than “Stairway to Heaven”. I like this much better on headphones than in my truck. Though the kick sticks out in the headphones. I like your voice a lot. I think this could be improved with more dynamics. I feel like the intensity level is the same for the entirety of the song, well except the very end. I think the solos could use some help. I admire you went for it knowing you’re up against the likes of Lunkhead and Paco. Cool song! Definitely a keeper! Well done!

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