Pigfarmer Jr
Forum postI like the vocal, I like the melody. The arrangement is pretty static and I feel it needs some dynamic contrast. Even with this bridge.
Get Cooking
This one by Eric N
Ain't nobody that can save themselves
There's too much going on in the kitchen
The fire the knives and the noise and the heat
There's too much going on in the kitchen
No time to stop and think
People got to eat
There ain't no time for a vocation
Are you doing too much or not enough?
Who knows but you gotta get cooking
Take this song it might help you along
Or not, okay, get cooking
Arms and legs, pots and pans
Everything you need is in the kitchen
Friends and enemies, lovers at war
Everything you need is in the kitchen
The stars fade in the lights
You can't see into the night
But Virgo Power's still in season
Are you doing too much or not enough?
Who knows but you gotta get cooking
Give you this song it might help you along
Or not, okay, get cooking
Sing a little later in the quiet time
when I try to make sense of what happened
when I saw you crying in the walk in cooler
There where anyone can see you break
It happens where it happens
And there's no way to control
How things pile up upon each other
Leave it until later
when my brain can catch a break
Take this song let it help you along
Or not, okay, get cooking
Take this song maybe help you along
Or not, that's cool, get cooking
I like the vocal, I like the melody. The arrangement is pretty static and I feel it needs some dynamic contrast. Even with this bridge.