pulsing bass gives this an interesting vibe. The dreamy guitar layers work well, the more up-front ones feels a bit rough in terms of timing, although the flangey / phasey stuff definitely sets an atmosphere. But for the most part I enjoy this up until the tempo shift, which is very messy and muddled - the drums don't seem to keep up with everything else (and they also get lost in the mix at this point).

First off, congratulations of having the longest song. I know you're very proud of that 😉

This is a very chilled track, I really like your use of panning and I has made me think maybe I should try hard panning stuff. Did you change tempo? Just felt a shift in the track that I didn't notice in my previous listens, wow, it does sound like you have. That was subtle and I didn't notice it before, unless you haven't and I am talking out of my arse.

Great dynamics, this song really swells.

I like your intro. It has a good feel. The arrangement and movement in your song is good. Your mix might not be as clean as it could be but I like the feel of your song. Congratz on your (nearly) 5:00 song. Did you purposefully cut it off before 5:00 or did the render cheat you out of that extra second?