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June MoonNur Ein XVII
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June Moon
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Entry from June Moon in Nur Ein XVII.

Lyrics must contain no rhyming couplets and no perfect end rhymes.

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June Moon by Rattlebox

Hey June
The moon that takes the longest to come out
Hey June
I’m hiding like a vampire from the day
Hey June
I’ve got a disagreement with the sun
Hey June
I used to be a flower til my world tumbled over

Summer is in blossom and I’m crawling under stones
Waiting for the starlight, then I walk around the block
And hurry home

Hey June
She’s dancing on the floor of every club
Hey June
She’s laughing in the corner of every bar
Hey June
I’ve got a disagreement with the night
Hey June
I used to be a comet til my world tumbled over

Days are getting shorter as the sunset hits the beach
There she sits with someone else, hand in hand and staring at the sea

New love, it must be wonderful
As I’m drowning with the June moon over me

Reviews

3 posted notes

vowlvom

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incredible intro, such exciting fuzz, it promises great things. But then the vocal comes in and it feels like you haven't quite figured out the melody or timing for this one yet, and I'm disappointed because I loved your other two but this one doesn't really work for me. It feels like it could absolutely rule with a bit of work though.

owl

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Big GBV energy. I love the aesthetic of the fuzzy guitars and poppy melody. It's a rough recording/some rough performances, but I like the song itself a lot, great lyrics and feel. I just listened to the redo and it's obviously a cleaner mix/performance, but I actually prefer some of the original lyrics.

sailingmagpie

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Really great opening to this. It hits the floor running and doesn't give up. This feels like it should soundtrack the moment a "will they won't they" couple finally kiss. The organ (or at least what I think is an organ) needs to be a little louder. It's completely drowned out by the guitars.

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