Very cool guitar duet. Nice transitions all around - it's a very epic song! The repeated lines work well with all the changes backing them. I'm very appreciative of the first lead guitar coming in, in particular. I'm not entirely sold on what the words mean or what I should feel - kind of wish this song were about a Hobbit.

I was beginning to wonder if you had lyrics for a minute. The music was interesting, but a couple transitions felt odd to me, like around the 16-17 second mark & the 57-56 second mark. When it comes to your sentence I don’t really make a connection between the musical style & your lyrics. They just felt tacked on, and that’s a lot of tacks considering the run on you used.