grumpymike
Forum postSome production and editing would help a lot. The repetitive prominent drums already start off on the wrong foot. It's not bad, but I need more dynamics/melody/hook.
Entry from Is This A Joke To You? in Nur Ein XIX.
Lyrics must contain a joke with a punchline
The Friends- Is This A Joke To You
I’m not funny, are you?
When people talk to me, I stare at my shoes
I prayed for the answers
Didn’t get what I was after
I’m not funny
Who’s too tall but comes up short
This guy, this guy
Who stumbles every start
This guy, this guy
I’m not funny, who knew
I say something, and regret every move
I may be a disaster
A melting nuclear reactor
I’m not funny
Who missed every clue
And finds a way to lose
Who’s all thumbs in the dark
This guy, this guy
Who lost his innocence
To blind indifference
Harmonizes dissonance
This guy, this guy
(Chorus??)
I’m not funny
Who runs away to hide
Rather than force a smile
Grows old but not wise
This guy, this guy
(Chorus again)
Some production and editing would help a lot. The repetitive prominent drums already start off on the wrong foot. It's not bad, but I need more dynamics/melody/hook.