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Forum postBonus points to you for doing something super different this time around. The ostinato vocal is a cool way to add rhythm within the limitations of the challenge. I like the slide guitar. The "ayudame" vocal is mixed a bit hot, maybe. Clever take on the challenge, lyrically--I like your concept a lot. I’m not super into the execution of the rap, although I liked some of the lines, like “The G.O.A.T. of unbridled ids.” The chorus feels too sparse and the surface level meaning a bit too simplistic (I also keep thinking of the theme song for the “Beat Kids” segment of Wonder Showzen, which doesn’t help) and I think the execution is technically fine but I have a hard time buying into the tough-guy delivery.