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Invisible Ink
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Max Bombast

Entry from Invisible Ink in Nur Ein XX.

Write about a lie and how it was discovered.

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Invisible Ink
by Max Bombast

I was meeting an old friend who told me:
*"Max do you pretend
To know the kind of shit
They teach our kids these days?
They say the earth is round,
But then how it don't fall down
If it ain't lying on a turtle's back in space?

When I was young they told me that the world was getting colder
But the story keeps on changing every year I'm getting older
Now they say a tree that falls may never make a sound
That North is South--oh great!--now all of my maps are upside down

The only thing that's stayed the same is
They can't keep their story straight
Everything we're taught's a lie!"*

When the rules are written in
Invisible ink
(Invisible ink)
((Invisible ink))
And when the truth is hidden please
Remember to think
(Remember to think)
(Remember to think)
Or we are all screwed
And there's no way back

I told him:
*"Just because it's wrong that doesn't mean it isn't right
If something isn't black that doesn't mean it must be white
You think that it's a flaw that all our old ideas are lies
But that just means our story's getting truer all the time

And I for one welcome revision
Rather than live in a fiction
I'll let time open my eyes"*

When the rules are written in
Invisible ink
(Invisible ink)
((Invisible ink))
And when the truth is hidden please
Remember to think
(Remember to think)
(Remember to think)
Or we are all screwed
And there's no way back

Reviews

2 posted notes

Pigfarmer Jr

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I’m digging the groove, especially on the chorus. The arrangement is cool. Your vocal is pretty darn good. Actually, all of the performances seem solid or better. But maybe this doesn’t sound glued together quite as well as some of your other entries. And not all of your choices are perfectly to my liking but I think you’ve nailed the songcraft (either in spite of or because of those differences.)
Lyric: Interesting take/angle. “Just because it’s wrong that doesn’t mean it isn’t right” seems contrary to the tercet that follows it, at least on the first read. The black/white line helps a little, I think. Not sure you hit the “how it was discovered” part of the challenge squarely on the head but it works for me.

Lunkhead

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I didn't care much but I'm not 100% sure this meets the challenge that well. Telling somebody the things they are saying are not true is maybe not the same as someone discovering a lie? Anyway, per usual very solid work but for me the choruses didn't 100% sound coherent with the other parts of the song, tone wise. Maybe some different transition in/out of the chorus would smooth things over more and make the choruses blend in more with the song.

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