Pigfarmer Jr
Forum postI’m digging the groove, especially on the chorus. The arrangement is cool. Your vocal is pretty darn good. Actually, all of the performances seem solid or better. But maybe this doesn’t sound glued together quite as well as some of your other entries. And not all of your choices are perfectly to my liking but I think you’ve nailed the songcraft (either in spite of or because of those differences.)
Lyric: Interesting take/angle. “Just because it’s wrong that doesn’t mean it isn’t right” seems contrary to the tercet that follows it, at least on the first read. The black/white line helps a little, I think. Not sure you hit the “how it was discovered” part of the challenge squarely on the head but it works for me.