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Rear Window
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Glow Worm

Entry from Rear Window in Nur Ein XV.

Tell a story from multiple points of view.

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Rear Window feat. Jae

by glow worm

there was an apartment
and a little plan to
move in together but now
it’s empty as an open grave
so what do you want
 me to say
it’s alright? It’s okay?

we been lying enough

so goddamn, goddamn, don’t turn around
let me watch you while you’re driving away
let two good years just burn to the ground
rear window shopping, nothing to say
so grab the wheel, no time to feel
aren’t you tired of breaking me?
goddamn, goddamn, don’t turn around
rear window shopping, nothing to see

there was a porch
and a little plan to
move in together but now
the idea of it happening makes me sick
so why do you make me a monster?
it’s not right
not ok
we’ve been lying enough

so goddamn, goddamn, please turn around
please watch me while i’m driving away
time don’t mean shit; you’re nothing to me
rear window shopping, nothing to say
so grab the wheel
no time to feel
aren’t you tired of breaking me?
so goddamn, goddamn, please turn around
rear window shopping nothin to see

BRIDGE :
there’s a time and a place
when the words were exchanged
they weren’t right
they were cold
(felt like ice through my soul)
and the memories held
fit the mold of the window
made things clear

so goddamn, goddamn, don’t turn around
let me watch you while you’re driving away
let two good years just burn to the ground
rear window shopping, nothing to say
so grab the wheel, no time to feel
aren’t you tired of breaking me?

goddamn, goddamn, don’t turn around
rear window shopping, nothing to see

nothing to see, nothing to see
nothing to save

Reviews

3 posted notes

GlennCase

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You're on point as always. The guest vocalist is phenomenal. My main complaint is that keyboard patch in the break sections - I don't care for the timbre. The mix is good overall. Things do sound a bit distorted (especially the vocals) but it does sound like an intentional choice. Hell of a chorus hook. Keep putting out material this good and you'll make it to the final round. If there is one thing that could work against you in later rounds: You have set the bar very high, and it can be very tough to continue putting out quality output as the competition goes on. As it sits, this is another stellar entry. Well met.

LYRICS: [GOOD] 2 points
STRUCTURE: [GOOD] 2 points
PERFORMANCE: [GOOD] 2 points
CONCEPT/CHALLENGE: [GOOD] 2 points
DYNAMICS/MIX: [GOOD] 2 points
SCORE: 10 out of 10

vowlvom

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This didn't quite grab me like your last couple of songs, although it's still extremely impressive. The "god damn" hook reminds me of a bunch of pop songs I've heard a bunch on the radio / at work and it really sticks in the head; the stuttery pauses that occasionally pop up in the other vocals bugged me a little, however. My main complaint with this one, compared to your previous ones, is that I had no real emotional reaction to this one at all - you proved extremely adept at giving me "the feels" in the first two rounds and I miss that here, although perhaps it's unfair to expect that from every song.

mo

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Something about the EQ of this track sounds wrong to me, it’s something in the treble roll-off and the overloaded bass synth sound. That being said, this is another vocal tour-de-force, as I’m sure you know. I personally found the “goddamn goddamn” a little cheesy—if this were a Broadway show and I could see a matching performance, maybe I’d feel differently about it. I love your guest’s voice, smoky and very Morcheeba-y. This is a good song, but it’s definitely not your best entry IMO, mostly bc your chorus hooks to now have been excellent and this one feels a bit forced even though the performance is excellent.

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