this really steps up a notch when those delayed / call-and-response-y harmonies come in. The rest of the song is okay, but the stalker story doesn't really have any surprises (although the "Oh I see" / OCD line is fun) and this one doesn't really stick in my head (unlike your chorus from the last round, which I will shout out here since I didn't write reviews for that round).

The guitar sitting squarely in my left ear is a tiny bit grating at first, as there's nothing to really balance it out on the right side. Vocal harmonies are really nice. Transition from clean to distorted guitar is nice. You've effectively created a creepy narrator character, and, like the Police song you reference, it's a compelling if slightly unnerving story. Points for that. Paco's voice works really well in this song. Really tasty licks in the call and response solo section. I like how the narrator gets slowly more unhinged throughout the song. You've done really well this round.

Guitars sound epic ofc. My main thing about this song is that I’m not a fan of the chorus vocal melody, the phrase goes down, and IMO it’s just almost catchy, but the way it ends with “can’t let it go” going down in pitch and feel each time is kind of a letdown, YMMV.

This song is like when someone makes uncomfortable jokes that you know are jokes but don't come off like jokes because there's maybe a little too much truth behind them, and the jokes aren't funny enough to compensate the uncomfortableness.
Strength: delivery, hooks
Weakness: not committed enough to funny or serious

I really like the sound of your voice blending with your guest vocalist's here, and it's fun listening to your dueling guitars. The moment when your voice gets really light and soft on "some of them good" is a really nice part of the vocal performance. I like the bounce and feel of this, but I found the melody of the chorus too simplistic, I kept wishing it went somewhere more interesting or at least didn't dive down in what felt like an anticlimactic way. The unreliable narrator lyrics are fun, and I like the storytelling, but it does seem like they lean pretty heavily on OCD jokes (or perhaps it's supposed to be just a totally earnest story about someone with OCD? But doesn't seem to ring true with what's being described).

I think this could do with a bit more of an intro before the vocals come in. The chorus is pleasing and the guest harmonies really add to the arrangement (especially like the OCD bit), as opposed to just ticking the challenge box. I don't find the verses as memorable though. This whole track is absolutely stacked with tasteful guitar tones (quelle surprise!) and I enjoy the jaunty feel especially in the bassline. The song just didn't grab me as much as the songs I ranked higher.