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Friday the 13th
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Entry from Friday the 13th in Nur Ein XVII.

write a feel-good song with happy lyrics and upbeat music

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Friday the 13th
by Moss Palace

Challenge: Feel good, happy lyrics, upbeat music

There wasn’t snow the night we met
In December
It was on Friday the Thirteenth
I remember
And if I could I would go back
and advise
Myself to take a chance
Push away my pride

How could I be so blind?
So much wasted time
On hearts that weren’t mine

A ride of twists and turns
You shouldn’t be concerned
The happy years outweigh
The fights and the tears

Oh how the days and months rolls on
It’s relentless
I love you even when life’s slow
And eventless
I can imagine how much worse
It could be
To never have this kind of love
You and me

How could I be so blind?
So much wasted time
On hearts that weren’t mine

A ride of twists and turns
You shouldn’t be concerned
The happy years outweigh
The fights and the tears

A ride of twists and turns
You shouldn’t be concerned
The happy years outweigh
The fights and the tears

A ride of twists and turns
You shouldn’t be concerned
The happy years outweigh
The fights and the tears

Reviews

6 posted notes

adamadamant

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:!: :!: :!: :!: Soul brigade is tearing down the walls.

vowlvom

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excellent vocal performance, good song that doesn't really put a foot wrong. Erm, fade-out at the end is a bit long? GOTTA CRITICISE SOMETHING. The breakdown / handclap bit is the best bit.

furrypedro

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In the context of this fight, I very much appreciate how you've avoided the pitfalls that so many competitors have fallen into regarding lyrical content. +5 (arbitrary) points for that. The music is undeniably sunny in a 70s soft rock way, and has a charactieristically smooth sound. I feel like the fade-out comes too early, but when there are 19 other songs to listen to I feel like you're doing this for our benefit, so thank you. Nice song with growing power. I almost ranked it above Lunkhead but I just felt the extra exuberance in that song earned it one more point.

grumpymike

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Perfect singing. Love the bass. Took me a couple listens to accept that the lyrics make sense... a little tenuous, but I'll allow it. Execution A+, concept: B+, hooks: A-

sailingmagpie

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A very enjoyable retro vibe that's reminiscent of Delaney and Bonnie. However, I feel the bpm should be a couple of notches higher, as that would give it more of a Motown/Northern Soul feel. The ending feels like a missed opportunity. It's crying out for a repeated belted chorus during the fade out. As it is, the ending is just a bit flat. Some of the lines do feel like placeholders as well, especially in the pre-chorus.

owl

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Great production, arrangement, and performance, this is probably the strongest entry of the round as far as overall polish. The "december"/"remember" rhyme and overall vibe kind of make me think of Earth, Wind, and Fire. Really enjoyed the groove and swagger of the music, especially those rhythm guitars and backing vocal accents. The breakdown and buildup work really well. This stands out from the pack in terms of genre and general sound. The lyrics felt a bit too vague for me, but they flow well with the music.

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