Those winding vocal rhythms and long, rambly lines are fantastic. This is really a goofy and cute song, but it’s also listenable--doesn’t just sound like a kid’s song to me. The guitar/piano combo works really nicely to give this a feeling of warmth and a dynamic build. Your lead vocal and harmonies sound really good, too. (The “mmm”s kind of remind me of that Crash Test Dummies song from the 90’s.) I wish the lyrics had rhymed a bit more, but the loose structure went along with that whole meandering feel, so it didn’t bother me too much in the end.