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Forum postcool beat, and the atmospheric arrangement works well with your weary vocal. Enjoyed this although it feels like the ending is a bit of an afterthought, "eh just layer some more lead guitar on there, it'll be fine".
you're too right - i've got no skin in this game
passing time, waiting for the sun to fall
thinner air making mad folk of us all
chemical burns branding us all the same
raging without staving off inside shame
everyone needs a way of standing tall
you're too right - i've got no skin in this game
passing time waiting for the sun to fall
telephones ringing sky painted in flame
up on the rooftop screening all my calls
once was a method, now more of a stall
making your goodbye a picture reframed
you're too right - i've got no skin in this game
passing time, waiting for the sun to fall
cool beat, and the atmospheric arrangement works well with your weary vocal. Enjoyed this although it feels like the ending is a bit of an afterthought, "eh just layer some more lead guitar on there, it'll be fine".
Great choice of beat, the squelchy bass is really nice, maybe it is a bit too far back in the mix for me, I'm not sure. The guitars with what sounds like a octaver is really interesting.
I like the rhythm. But might be a bit too similar throughout. Although I like the vocal build, the energy of the song didn't really build. Your vocal didn't feel like it sat just right in a few places. Maybe that's a nitpick. Cool phrasing, though. I like the "skin this game" melody.