Very mellow. Great arrangement. I don't like how you draw out some of the syllables, seems gimmicky. Cacophony detected, but it's very, very understated. Some points off for that. Lyrics are rather hard to follow. I can dig this song. Perhaps could have stood being a bit shorter.

I was completely with you through the first verse & diggin' everything. Then I got lost halfway through the 2nd verse. I had to look up the term "cacophony" before doing these reviews. I didn't let this challenge effect my scoring too much simply cause I didn't feel qualified to judge it. I didn't really hear it in this song...but that could just be me.

On first listen I thought - "oh, girl with great voice - this is Merisan" - then was surprised to hear Erin pop up a bit later. I really liked this. You pass the challenge ....JUST - and that is what annoys me. This song would be awesome with some real light/shade stuff. You need real cacophony. I want to hear you go APESHIT and smash those frickking piano keys until tiny pools of blood appear as you scream like a banshee....and then.....it goes quiet again and your nice song comes back in.

...well, that's what I want to hear anyway.....

.....I will update this as time permits.....

Patience Grasshopper

Bran Tant This was really pretty enjoyable. Got a bit sloppy in parts - but sloppy in a Velvet Undergroundy sort of way - which is acceptable. Limited lyricwise - but still quite effective despite that.