NUR EIN
about 7 years agopassed
3:07
Message Received
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Grumpy Mike

Entry from Message Received in Nur Ein XIV.

Use of spelling in a song.

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D E A R
To whom it concerns
I'm writing you an apology
You don't know me but you will know what I've done
So you don't make the same mistake

I was the first one
To take the poison
I was the first son
I am the reason

That you will pay
By the sweat of your brow
You will eat from the ground
Every day
You'll be cursed to toil
Until you return to soil

L O V E
Yours truly
I hope this message weathers time
If you receive this gift to you
You'll never have to die

I am the way the light
The truth and life
I am the only first son
The only reason

That you are free
Cast aside your shackled
And drop the vanity
To follow me
And take your cross
Before we leave

L O V E comma yours truly
You don't have to die if this message is received

Reviews

3 posted notes

thirdcatmusic

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this is good, but in a genre I don't like much (sounds very much like like '90s alternative rock), so a bit of genre bias would keep it out of the very top of my rankings if I were a judge but it's really good. great singing, mixing, production, playing, & singing.

vowlvom

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I have some genre bias against this one but it's very well done. As far as heavy rock goes this reminds me more of the 1% of stuff that I do like than the 99% that I don't (probably demonstrating my genre-blindness here but some of it reminded me of Deftones a little) - the big dynamic shift into the chorus is great and the drony, chanty vocal section is very cool.

Cybronica

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sounds very muse. I like this a lot, especially that bass line. The chorus is so cathartic. The play out is really cool, too.