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Frankie Big Face

Entry from Patient Number 7 in Nur Ein VI.

Significant use of cacophony.

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Patient Number Seven - Frankie Big Face

Patient number one had it coming
From the moment that he walked onto the ward
Beating brows and tipping tables
Like some wicked self-appointed overlord
Patient two had to swing
'Cause he witnessed everything
Now they're the most unlikely pair
Laying bare at the bottom of the fjord.

Patient number three looked at me
As if he knew about the malice in my heart
I grabbed a half-empty syringe
And hurled it at him like a tranquilizer dart
Patient four, wanting more
Helped me drag him to the shore
And then he dug a shallow grave
For the man who would soon be his counterpart.

Patient number five was still alive
When they wheeled him out and put him on the bus
Though I knew he couldn't talk without a tongue
The evidence seemed onerous
Just for kicks, patient six
Threw herself into the mix
Signed a full confession, waived her right to trial
And took the chair without a fuss.

Patient number seven had it coming
From the moment that he came onto the scene
The bullet blew away the secrets
That his conscience had been harboring for weeks
I closed the door on my past
And made this victim my last
And I can tell you this with no uncertainty
Because patient number seven was me.

Reviews

3 posted notes

jast

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Eww, plosives. There's something about this song that I can't name, and I don't even know whether it's good or bad. That's helpful, right? I think it's good, and I think it's the extreme dominance of the bass in the mix. It all fits together anyway. Excellent lyrics. Thanks for some actual storytelling. Cacophony successfully detected. Okay, there's a significant portion of cacophony, but it's not really significant to the song and the story. I mean, there's clearly some deranged thing going on in the story, so that works, but there's no obvious reason why the cacophony should set in where it does.

Spintown

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Wasn't a huge fan of that odd instrumental section, but the lyrics were great. Overall the song worked in a creepy way. Well done.

Caravan Ray

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Like Paco - this should not work. I had pre-determined that I did not want this title to tell me about Patients 1 to 6. And I do not like MaCartneyesque warblings at the best of times. But I liked this. I have no effing idea what the lyrics are about - but they were intrguing enough to keep me interested. Easily my favourite of yours so far in this comp. Great cacophony. That is what I wanted to hear.

Frankie Big Face - Patient Number 7 | Nur Ein