Caravan Ray
Forum postNice work Chippy. You best one so far
Entry from Byron Bay in Nur Ein X.
Must feature a guest who has never been in a Nur Ein song before.
distant look in your eyes
passionless touch of your kiss
nothing left to surprise
bitterly wasting our lives
so I fade into memory
the way things used to be
that beautiful day
together in Byron Bay
we're sleep walking through this
living a shadow of lies
dreams of long past bliss
vacantly we just exist
so I fade into memory
the way things used to be
that beautiful day
together in Byron Bay
(instrumental)
so I fade into memory
the way things used to be
that beautiful day
together in Byron Bay
Nice work Chippy. You best one so far
After so many songs with your overprocessed vocals, I think maybe you were a bit rusty when it came to mixing a "normal" voice. Your guest singer is good, but I wanted her more front-and-center, more clear, more immediate. And I have to admit, when she hits that downward broken chord (the word "beautiful" in the chorus), that strikes me as one of those musical phrases that your vocoder would have made pop. Ultimately, this is a mostly-good song that happens to be in a genre I don't enjoy. Sorry I don't have more useful feedback.