Very experimental, to say the least. I admire and applaud your courage. But you may be in trouble this round. Is that your mom talking or the TV? Is your mom on TV? I love how gonzo this is but it may lack too much focus. Chin up, troop!

I do love a good bit of dance but this feels like a slightly tentative and amateurish step outside your comfort zone. I don't get what you're trying to acheive by all the drop-outs - they have the dual effects of making you sound like a dj who doesn't know what they're doing and/or can't beat-match properly and losing any momentum the song has. The atmospheric bit at the end has a bit of an Aphex Twin ambient works feel which is great but there's no focus, the song feels like it's trying to be a lot of things without really achieving anything. Sorry. Ooh, more constructive comments - layer up the beats with multiple kick/snare sounds so you can get a nice bit of sub bass in the kick but also something with a bit of click to give it a nice full punch, also layering the synths - if done tastefully with various complimentary sounds you can keep the minimal feel but give it a bit more richness/texture and space.

Ross Durex: Standard Ross fare. The chorus is my fave part, the drum march and brass are killer.