JonPorobil
Forum postYou've got so many ideas crammed into this song that they all step on each other's toes. We've got the rap about the homicide detective, the "Fresh Prince" sample part, the "Voices in my Head" part, and that strange outro. None of these are really bad (except maybe the "Fresh Prince" part), but I don't think they all belong in the same song, and the transitions between them (or, to be more honest, the lack thereof) make their juxtaposition even more jarring. I had to check back to my screen a few times to make sure the song hadn't abruptly switched over. Judge #1 saved your hide, it looks like!