It feels so good when everything comes together like this. When we’re all clicking. When it’s a group effort. It’s so good to hear Melvin’s vocals on a song. Ken’s lyrics are wonderful. I just love this song! Everyone did an awesome job! I sure hope we advance, I think we have a good shot. The competition is really tough.

Good job everyone! Good luck!

/// at first, I dinged you because it seems that you've written a song called "Sunshine City"; then Niveous pointed out that is a tongue twister as well faceplam ///
+++ tongue twisters in the round (and in the chorus!) +++
+++ solo guitar tone +++
--- the verse melody drags ---
--- weak vox ---