Would've been nice to have the lyrics posted. Fighting the song to make them out, and make sense of them. Seems (lyrics) all over the map. Tea's up. Nice musical swelling in end, but to the same lyrics as the earlier tripping through the tulips? Seems like you're sabotaging whatever you're trying to say with the song by doing that. Music pleasant.
Performance 3; Production 4; Pleasure 3; Lyrics 2