I absolutely love this track, but I'm not sure what that clicking noise that comes up periodically is, or whether you intended it to be out of sync the the song's tempo. There's a section where the clicking and instrumentation halt abruptly and I thought the song was over, but then it started back up again - possibly not the best-executed pause/transition in your ouevre. (But hey, listen to my song this week; yes, I'm a hypocrite.) Also the switch from triplets to straight-beat for the last part isn't as effective as it could be; I'd recommend keeping that ride in there.