Hmm, this is different. Interesting contrast between guitar and synth. Mix is a bit undefined. I like the effect on the vocals in this kind of setting. This is a decent stab at cacophony, but still too regular, especially in terms of rhythm. Another song here that fails to engage. I think the concept could have grown into a much better song. Mix lessons: use stereo panning as appropriate and EQ different tracks differently. Lyrics are okay (short lyrics, short review).

The music sounded chaotic. Maybe you meant to do that because it's about an insane guy, but it didn't come together for me. Lyrically there isn't much there unfortunately.