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Pyramids
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Micah Sommersmith

Entry from Pyramids in Nur Ein XX.

Use a repeating melodic phrase that gets shorter as the song progresses/builds.

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Pyramids
Micah Sommersmith

Notes on composition and challenge fulfillment:
SpoilerThe full melody is in the vocal from 0:05 to 0:55, and is roughly pyramid-shaped in pitch, starting low, reaching its highest point on the second syllable of the word "pyramids", and then descending to end low again. In each repetition, the melody is shortened at both the beginning and the end, with the overall pyramid shape preserved but getting smaller and smaller. Additionally, the song modulates down by a whole step each repetition. The intended effect is that the pyramid is gradually sinking into the sand.

Remember when you were beautiful?
Remember when you were strong?
Remember having the world at your feet?
Remember when you were young?

There are pyramids in my mind
And I visit them all the time
The crumbling ruins of a kingdom long beyond its prime
And every day they’re sinking as the shifting sand dunes climb
And that’s fine, that’s fine

Remember when you were strong?
Remember having the world at your feet?
Remember when you were young?

There are pyramids in my mind
And I visit them all the time
And marvel at the majesty now coated all in grime
I can’t picture how it was no matter how I try

Remember having the world at your feet?
Remember when you were young?

There are pyramids in my mind
And I visit them all the time
And wonder at the weight that’s always pulling on my spine

Remember when you were young?

There are pyramids in my mind
And I visit them all the time
There are pyramids in my mind
Pyramids
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