there was a confidence to your previous song that helped push it to a far higher level, this one feels a little more tentative again and doesn't work as well for me as a result, even though I think there's a good song in there - it's just harder to enjoy it with the vocals feeling muffled. Glenn already mentioned the strange artifacts on the rapped section (it sounds like a 64kbps mp3) but said it wasn't an issue for him - it was for me, I want to hear the cleaned up version of this song but in its current state I was a little disappointed.

John Maus? (no) cool electric guitar in unintelligible scribble, cool bassline

For me, the songwriting here lacks the charm and catchiness of last week’s entry, and while I like the lo-fi bubbly synths, the mix feels so rough, it’s sort of hard to listen to, especially that bridge that sounds like a Skype call gone wrong. Too repetitive, although it has good advice and is unfortunately pretty relatable for me.

The rap verse has some Bloodhound Gang vibes, although much cleaner, which makes me giggle every time. In general, this is a fun, funky song, and I dance every time it plays. The vocals feel a little unconfident in the verses, so I'm not sure if they just need another pass or something else. The vocals in the chorus hit really well, and you're all in, so I think if you can keep that energy into the verses, this would be fire all around.

your vocals, when compared to the rest of the sounds in the song, sound a little like you’re singing through a cloth. I think it would help if you maybe... bumped up the reverb? Recorded in your bathroom? Sing closer to the mic? Increase the upper partials in the EQ? Not sure the best fix, but it makes the vocals sound a little like karaoke. I think the first verse could be cut- no need to set up the story, the point is already clear. The processing on the rap breakdown is cool, but it makes it hard to understand. At the end of the chorus (especially at the end) I want to GO for the high note. You pulled the punch, and it’s very unsatisfying. The song has a good beat. Like a funky town era dance song.