Very creative! I had to look up parataxis. The drums could have used more changes in the bridge to make up for the lack of other changes, but then what happens after is very welcome! It's a nice whimsical song that has a different take on the title than I expected. Because of the whimsical nature, the coherence as a work goes down... so I must ponder that before ranking.

This is about what I thought I’d get from you based on what I’ve heard thus far. It’s not a bad thing, it’s rather pleasant to listen to. At the same time I wasn’t really moved in any way, and there’s not much of a story. Given the challenge though, I can’t really fault you there. Cool sound. You’re the first song I listened too this round, and I’m doing the reviews as I listen...so I have no idea where you’ll fall in my rankings yet.