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Rear Window
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Micah Sommersmith

Entry from Rear Window in Nur Ein XV.

Tell a story from multiple points of view.

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Rear Window
*Micah Sommersmith
with guest vocalist Hilary Kathryn*

I remember that summer, I was nine years old / I remember that summer, I had just turned ten
Mom and dad said, let’s hit the road / When my mama that said we had to move again
Their jobs weren’t paying them enough to live / Johnny’d been drinking, he was making fists
They said California’s got nothing to give / And all her friends in New York were his

So the car is packed, I climb in back,
But I don’t wanna go
I leave the place I’ve known, my face
Pressed against the rear window

Thinking no one in the world has ever been as lonely as me
There’s a sadness in my heart no one else can know
I’ve got a new life ahead, but all that I can see
Is my old life sliding away in that rear window

Well we drive through the desert and the mountains too / State by state on our journey west
And I sit and stare at the backwards view / But back to the east my focus rests
Some empty road in the dead of night / Somewhere in Nebraska, three AM
We pass the only car in sight / I hear another engine hum

And as we pass a vision’s cast in the moon’s translucent glow
I catch a glimpse of another kid
With their face against the rear window

I think there’s someone who looks just about as lonely as me
With a sadness in their heart like the one I know
Got a new life ahead, but all that they can see
Is their old life sliding away in that rear window

Well life goes on, and now I’m grown,
But my mind often goes
To the kid I spied that empty night
With their face against the rear window

And I know someone out there was once just as lonely as me
And now I feel I’ll never really be alone
For a second on that road, we shared our hopes and fears
Then we said goodbye through the rear window
Then we said goodbye through the rear window

Reviews

3 posted notes

GlennCase

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We have the return of the harsh S sounds, as well as harsh high end in the percussion. I do like the call and response of the vocals. Overall mix is dull, and lifeless. Good lyrics, and a decent performance. Fun, playful lead guitar part that is quite possibly the best thing happening in the song. I do like the structure.

LYRICS: [OKAY] 1 point
STRUCTURE: [GOOD] 2 points
PERFORMANCE: [OKAY] 1 point
CONCEPT/CHALLENGE: [OKAY] 1 point
DYNAMICS/MIX: [OKAY] 1 point
SCORE: 6 out of 10

vowlvom

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This is one of the best Micah songs I've ever heard, the lyrics are sweet and melancholy and a really inspired take on the challenge. I love your two vocals together and the little guitar hooks are devilishly catchy. Nothing really to critique, your mix could certainly be clearer / punchier but it has a warmth to it that suits the song. This is excellent.

mo

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Ooh a balanced vocal mix. This song is pretty charming, Johnny & June flavors. I like the take, very clever, and that part of it is well executed. Can we talk about the solo for a moment? I am of the school that thinks instrumental solos should tell stories. This solo starts out well with a good lead-in phrase and answer, but when you get to the second half, I think something needs to happen. Too much stays the same—pacing, neck position, playing techniques and feel—and as a result the solo just sort of sits there and doesn’t come to a climax and resolve. For some reason in this round there were a number of unfulfilling solos, and I’m writing about it here, but it’s not just you. It’s just in this case, I feel like a really well crafted solo would’ve taken this song up an extra notch.

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