the one-word-per-line rondel is very clever! I wish the harmonies were a little more consistent as the ones that do work sound great (also deeply aware that this criticism also applies to my own song). Delay on the guitar is cool, although I always struggle with this sort of 80s-y FX heavy guitar tone.

I do like the music in this track. The drums are nice and the flanged guitar sounds really nice. I'm not very keen on the overdrawn vocals, it gets a bit much as the track goes on and distracts from everything else that is going which is really nice.

Cool guitars. Those atmospheric flourishes (a la U2 or some other 80's radio song band) are very nice. I love the delay. The vocals didn't do a lot for me. Maybe not tight enough? I liked the texture at the end but this definitely felt like a 4:00 song.