There are some good riffs in here, and melodic ideas as well. The pop-ish change is very nice, and provides a good taste of sugar after the saltier first part. This is probably the best that I've heard from you. The vocals wobbley get the message across and the arrangemment makes sense instead of changes just smooshed in. Production lands some punches and misses others, but clear to hear. Good playing, too! Last night the swami thought you might be gone,today not so sure.