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Lunkhead
NovelNur Ein XVII
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Novel
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Entry from Novel in Nur Ein XVII.

Create samples from a non-musical recording and make them integral to the song

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"Novel"
by Lunkhead
Spoiler
Obviously most of my samples are just of our cat. The "shaker" is me moving a scoop in his (clean) litter box.

Remember that summer we worked so hard
Building a spaceship in our backyard
I made you a helmet with room for your ears
We flew to the moon and took rocks for souvenirs

But time moves so quickly for you my friend
We may part soon but I’ll see you again

If I wrote a novel it would be about you
And all the adventures that we’ve been through
I’d fill every line with words so fine
So you could live on long after we’re gone

In our new time machine we went to the Jurassic
You ate a butterfly, man, that was classic
Then we saw the pyramids and the Parthenon
Wondered where the civilized people have gone?
SpoilerEgyptians and Greeks held cats in very high regard

But life goes by quickly for you my friend
We may part soon but I’ll see you again

If I wrote a novel it would be about you
And all the adventures that we’ve been through
I’d fill every line with words so fine
So you could live on long after we’re gone

Of course I’m being silly imagining all that
You’re not a person, you’re just a cat
Still we’ve had such good times together
I wouldn’t trade a minute for a map to any treasure

But time moves so quickly for you my friend
We may part soon but I’ll see you again

If I wrote a novel it would be about you
And all the adventures that we’ve been through
I’d fill every line with words so fine
So you could live on long after we’re gone

Reviews

5 posted notes

vowlvom

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wait, the Egyptians liked cats? First I'm hearing about this. A pretty pleasant G&G song and obviously I find cat content to be a general plus, but this doesn't feel like it engages with the challenge as creatively as a lot of the songs and the song itself isn't terribly memorable.

furrypedro

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You have been fairly outspoken about how draining you have found the Nur Ein experience this year, so it comes at little surprise that this song feels like the sound of a man who plans to go out on his own terms. I think you know exactly what you are doing, you wanted to write this song regardless of how it would play in the competition, or perhaps because of that. It's a sweet song, one that feels like it exists purely for you and your little friend. I suppose it's hardly worth mentioning that the samples are far from integral to the song, but I feel it is encumbent upon me to be clear about why I ranked it last. It's a shame that you've not embraced the challenge more enthusiastically because you are an exceptionally talented musician and producer and I've no doubt that you could have made a mindblowing song that nailed the challenge had you chosen to do so.

Evermind

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This is a sweet little song about your aging cat. I really like the vocal performance and the acoustic guitar sounds really great. I don't think this song meets the challenge, though. The samples of your cat and the litter box are related to the song's concept, but if you took them out of the song I don't feel like the song would change very much at all sonically. They don't give any different meaning to the song, either, so I don't think this can be called "integral".

sailingmagpie

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I feel like I'm going to get the cold shoulder from my cats after ranking this so low! This is such a sweet, lovely slice of catcore and if I heard it during FAWM etc, I'd be totally on board. Unfortunately, if doesn't really hit the challenge brief, though the samples obviously do tie into the lyrics. Speaking of which, I absolutely love the lyrics. They do a really good job of conveying the unconditional love you feel for your furry faced companion and it's great how personal this comes across.

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