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Patient Number 7
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Billy's Little Trip

Entry from Patient Number 7 in Nur Ein VI.

Significant use of cacophony.

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Patient #7
by BLT

-verse
I could see the look in their eyes
When they came to say their last goodbyes
Standing at a distance safely upwind as I breathe
God forbid you get too close and catch my disease

-bridge
No one will miss me when I'm gone
No one will miss me when I'm gone

-verse
Hear them whisper in the hallways, never call you by name
Everybody's got a number in the dying game
Thinking back to all the things that I really should have done
But here I'm lying and dying as useless as a condom full of cum

-chorus
No one will miss me when I'm gone
No one will miss me when I'm gone
No one will miss me when I'm rotting in the ground
No one will miss me when I'm gone, when I'm gone
No one will miss me when I'm gone

-verse
I can feel the life that I knew shedding all around
Like the fermented fruit on the trees falling to the ground
It's not true that you go out the same way you came in
I'm not cold, I'm not crying and I'm full of sin

-chorus X2
No one will miss me when I'm gone
No one will miss me when I'm gone
No one will miss me when I'm rotting in the ground
No one will miss me when I'm gone, when I'm gone
No one will miss me when I'm gone

Reviews

3 posted notes

jast

Forum post

Interesting sounds. Painfully pitchy vocals. Perhaps it has to do with the way you monitor during recording the vocals...? Anyway. Great song, good lyrics (I can't see even an attempt to reference the "7", though). However, no cacophony here. I assume you meant for those weird sounds to be the cacophony. That isn't enough, and it wasn't really "significant" by any meaning of the word, either. You get "token effort" points for the challenge.

Spintown

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Really liked the lyrics, with one exception. A condom full of cum isn't an image I needed. Music rocked, but I didn't hear anything in terms of cacophony? It'll hurt you a little, but you're still safe in my rankings. Hopefully the other judges picked up on something I missed, cause this was rockin'.

Caravan Ray

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Wow! This is spooky in its prescience.
You are gone - and you are right - we don't miss you!

Just kidding - this is great. You should not be gone. Obviously some of the judges here are as useless as a condom full of cum. Your best song of the competition for mine. I liked the lyrics, and I liked how you met the challenge by singing painfully out of tune....sorry, joke again - couldn't resist it - this is actually one of the best vocals I have heard from you. It all sounds pretty good to me. And the discordant guitar does pass the cacophony test for me.

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