You always win points for inventiveness but sometimes I wonder about your execution. The production level is fine but there are some really terrible lyrics here ("moaning and groaning like some kind of chimp"?), and sometimes the songs (particularly this one) have too many ideas/different sections for their own good. I commend you for your ambition, but I'm guilty of exactly the same thing and unfortunately I've learnt the hard way that more often than not less really is more. And if you're going for more is more it needs to be pretty damn special. This is good, but I don't feel that it's special. I think I'm extra critical of you because I know that you've got something awesome drifitng around inside your brain.